[Whelp] Omnidormu

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[Whelp] Omnidormu

Post#1 » Fri Aug 18, 2017 8:56 pm

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Dragonflight: Blue Dragonflight
Dragon Name: Omnidormu
Aliases: Altum
Age: 130
Gender: Male
Adulthood: Whelp
Loyalty(-ies): Blue Dragonflight
View of Heartwing: Omnidormu has no experience with the group yet but is willing to learn.
Affiliations: Has no affiliations yet


Attitude/Behaviour: Respectful, fair, striving
Key traits: Very curious and playful, likes to make friends, and is happy most of the time.
Respect for authority: He has high respect for everyone, especially the authority.
Character Personality: The personality of this character is naive and young. He is curious and likes to learn things, to one day grow up and be a great part of the leadership himself.
IRL-Person Personality: I like to thing of my self as not being arrogant and rude. I am mostly nice towards everybody, and never mix up OOC and IC. I'm Danish, so that might reflect on my RP and such.
Hobbies: Likes to learn and use his powers.
Occupation: Not really anything-
Future desired position: He strives to be a leader in company with others.
Common spells: He morphs to a dragon and can fire arcane missiles and such.
Prestige spells: Arcane spells mostly.
Backstory Summary: He was born a blue dragon due to his mom being one. His egg was stolen and sold on the black market to a female, who took good care of him in Dalaran. He got raised there and sought out in the world.
First time at dragon roleplay? A little abit
(IC) Reason to join: He doesn't have a place to stay with others of his kind.
(OOC) Reason to join: Thought it looked cool.
Are you aware of the guild rules, the content of the Tome of Ancient Times forum and the lore of your dragonflight?: Yes
Have you understood current timeline of Heartwing?: Yes
Do you fully understand the lore of your dragonflight, and other essential lore information: Yes

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Re: [Whelp] Omnidormu

Post#2 » Sat Aug 19, 2017 9:28 pm

Hello Omnidormu,


I am the guild leader of Heartwing and I have chosen to personally assign myself to review your application. A quick rundown of what the color coding I do for applications means. Green means very acceptable or remarkable. Yellow means it needs elaboration, and red means it is absolutely unacceptable.



Dragonflight: Blue Dragonflight
Dragon Name: Omnidormu

Dormu refers to that of a Bronze Dragonflight nomenclature, which seems really odd for a Blue Dragonflight dragon. Should be changed to follow canon lore

Age: 130

Adulthood: Whelp

In that age, your dragon would not be a whelpling. Please refer to: viewtopic.php?f=12&t=584 for more information on our aging policy :)

Affiliations: Has no affiliations yet

In 130 years, he has had no affiliations?

Occupation: Not really anything-

Nothing at all?

Common spells: He morphs to a dragon and can fire arcane missiles and such.

Shapeshifting into a dragon isn't really a spell in itself.

Prestige spells: Arcane spells mostly.

What arcane spells?

Additional note:
Your application seems well-written but unfortunately lacking in substance or content to be able to properly evaluate your character's assessment into the guild. Perhaps a bit short answers, and we quite not sure whether we are understanding the character you're trying to accomplish.


For now, I have to put this application as denied.
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