[Matured Dragon] Ragdegos

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[Matured Dragon] Ragdegos

Post#1 » Wed Jun 06, 2018 4:11 pm

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Dragonflight: Blue Dragonflight
Dragon Name: Ragdegos
Aliases: Racen Summerwood
Age: 380 Gender: Male
Adulthood: Matured Dragon
Loyalty(-ies): Blue Dragonflight,The Kirin Tor
View of Heartwing: Though never able to fight alongside him, the Dragon had heard of Heartwing's exploits and admired their success, even envious, himself constantly wishing to be able to smite the wicked. Unfortunately, he had been held back by a lack of allies
Affiliations: Blue Dragonflight(Loyal), Alliance/Horde(Neutral), Kirin Tor


Attitude/Behaviour: Ragdegos has a positive outlook on himself, with a constant drive to train and grow stronger. He is quiet and hard-working, not one to boast- but he is also brooding, and distrustful of new faces
Key traits: Lawfull,Gentle,Paragon
Respect for authority: Ragdegos doesn´t follow it blindly and does protest if he sees it as unnecessarily cruel. At least he will follow and respect orders of authority
Character Personality: Ragdegos' one of the important personality is best summed up with one sentence; a shell of silence surrounding a courageous warrior.
IRL-Person Personality: Friendly,Gentle same as my in game character :)
Hobbies: Watching stars at night sky, chilling, try new spells
Occupation: Spell-weaver
Future desired position: -
Common spells: Arcane-Regdegos improved himself only at Arcane, and he can use most of strongest spells which geting power from Arcane
Prestige spells: Arcane Breath:After casting this spell affected targets explode with enegry of arcane while exploding that energy can jump on nearby allies of enemies, Vortex: Spins up a whirling vortex of Arcane energy, dealing Arcane damage to all enemies caught inside of it, Arcane Storm: Fires a salvo of magic missiles into the air. These missiles select a random nearby enemy target and slam into them, dealing heavy Arcane damage
Backstory Summary: Ragdegos born in Nexus, as a breed of Sidragos. In his early life, he started learning about power of the their domain, arcane. Ragdegos was live in life with his father's motto "The power in your soul, find it and unleash it, to claim, your true strength". When Ragdegos asks meaning of this motto, Sidragos replied him like that "If you think your domain will give you power because you born as its holder, it could be only madness... , it will not show you true power of it. You need arrive that power in your soul...and you want know how?, You need show good effort, you need train, you need be worthy of this domain and its power, and when you be worty enough, it will grant you the true strength of arcane magic... .
Ragdegos started to learn about arcane and all kind of things which getting power from arcane. He started learning from wisdom drakes about arcane powers and which races closest ones at Arcane. He learned about Quel'dorei-s, and their Sunwell. The Sunwell is a fount of mystical power located on the Isle of Quel'Danas. While its waters, holy to the high elves, were originally pure arcane power, it has since been restored as a fount of both arcane and Light energy. For research it Ragdegos chose High Elf to shapeshift form. He went to Quel'Danas for make research about Sunwell and its arcane power. He trained here with High Elf Arcanists about arcane power. After finding most secrets of arcane power, Ragdegos left Sunwell. He was quick learner about arcane because of his domain. But his training does not end with it, he went to Dalaran for improving his arcane power by Kirin Tor's elite magicians. Ragdegos lived at Dalaran as a sorcerer.
The Nexus War
Ragdegos was one of the blue dragons who joined Kirin Tor and champions of Azeroth's side against Malygos. Unluckily Ragdegos and his father were on the different sides. Sidragos and some dragonkins and dragonspawns which was under command of him aided Malygos in this great war. By the way when Sidragos was one of the commanders of Blue Dragonflight at Azure Dragonshrine, Since the start of the Nexus War, Malygos has been diverting Azeroth's ley lines to the shrine, empowering his flight's dragons. After fall of the Malygos and his followers, he left Northrend, these places made him feel proud and upset. Maylgos' fall made everyone feel the regret because he was one of the important creatures in the universe. But the main thing for Ragdegos was his father's death. Sidragos was so loyal to Malygos and whatever is ordered by him, he was ready to accept blindly, at least it ends with his own life... That's why Ragdegos left Nexus and Northrend as fast as he can.
Cataclysm
Before long Deathwing showed himself... As the End of the Azeroth, It was one of the battles which want all universe to stay against him! Ragdegos couldn't condone it. With some friends from different dragonflights, aided again champions. Deathwing's fall let the new century for the blue dragonflights. Kalecgos became the leader of blue dragon aspect. After it, Ragdegos went again to Dalaran and lived there and continued his training, he started teaching mortal students either. He has one aim, after all, seek the world without any chaos...
First time at dragon roleplay? I did raid/dungeon events as dragon , much time
(IC) Reason to join: Heard about Heartwing's acts while in Cataclysm, It was his one of the aim to join them. It will good place for him to improve his arcane power more and more. And he can win his xenophobity, asociality.
(OOC) Reason to join: I want really good exotic race RP, bored RP as playable races.. and their bored life
Are you aware of the guild rules, the content of the Tome of Ancient Times forum and the lore of your dragonflight?: most of them
Have you understood current timeline of Heartwing?: yes
Do you fully understand the lore of your dragonflight, and other essential lore information: aye
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Re: [Matured Dragon] Ragdegos

Post#2 » Wed Jun 06, 2018 5:26 pm

Your first character must be below the age of 500.

View the rules at application.php

Denied.
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Re: [Matured Dragon] Ragdegos

Post#3 » Wed Jun 06, 2018 5:54 pm

Fixed

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Re: [Matured Dragon] Ragdegos

Post#4 » Wed Jun 06, 2018 10:54 pm

Will be reviewed by our officer: Matt
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Re: [Matured Dragon] Ragdegos

Post#5 » Thu Jun 07, 2018 8:17 pm

Hey there! This is Matt and I've been assigned to review this application.

I'll start off by listing a few issues I see with the application. We have an expectation when it comes to a character's age and the content of their backstory. While the backstory does display a basic understanding of certain events, the construction lacks refinement.

Ragdegos born in Nexus, as a breed of Sidragos... Luckily Ragdegos and his father were on the same side. Sidragos and some dragonkins and dragonspawns which was under command of him, aided champions.


I imagine you very likely picked a dragon out of the blue. Unfortunately, Sidragos is most certainly under the service of Malygos during the Nexus War.

In his early life, he started learning about his secret power. Ragdegos was live in life with his father's motto "The power in your soul, find it and unleash it, to claim, your true strength".


What does this mean? There is no clear definition of what this secret power is. We'd appreciate more clarity on this.

He learned about Quel'dorei-s, and their Sunwell. The Sunwell is a fount of mystical power located on the Isle of Quel'Danas. While its waters, holy to the high elves, were originally pure arcane power, it has since been restored as a fount of both arcane and Light energy. For research it Ragdegos chose High Elf to shapeshift form.


While not completely incorrect, the Sunwell is mainly in the hands of the Sin'dorei. While Quel'dorei pilgrims are allowed, they are typically not too well regarded by the Sin'dorei.

He went to Quel'Danas for make research about Sunwell and its arcane power. He trained here with High Elf Arcanists about arcane power.


I can't imagine too many Quel'dorei mages are hanging around the Sunwell.

Ragdegos lived at Dalaran so long time, as sorcorer. After many years, The Nexus War arrived...


It is a relatively short period in which the Sunwell is restored and The Nexus War begins. Roughly just one year.

For now, I will have to say this application has been denied. You are welcome to patch up the discrepancies listed above and try again.
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Re: [Matured Dragon] Ragdegos

Post#6 » Thu Jun 07, 2018 10:44 pm

Fixed as much as i can

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Re: [Matured Dragon] Ragdegos

Post#7 » Sat Jun 09, 2018 9:04 pm

Updated, 06.10.2018

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Re: [Matured Dragon] Ragdegos

Post#8 » Sun Jun 10, 2018 7:24 pm

With the proper edits made to the application and the stipulation that you'll receive a helping hand from one of our senior members, the administration has accepted this application.

You can contact me via Discord at Varlamus#2180 for your invite to the guild and our Discord.
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