[Pandaren] Qiu Shi Huang

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[Pandaren] Qiu Shi Huang

Post#1 » Mon Jul 30, 2018 6:41 pm

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Application: Mortal
Race: Pandaren
Name: Qiu Shi Huang
{Optional} Other names: N/A
{Optional} Dragonsworn? To whom?: Liadormi (Female Bronze Dragonflight)
Class: Mistweaver (Monk)
Age: 37 (Middle Age)
Gender: Male
Loyalty (-ies): One fact is for certain, Lorewalker Qiu Shi Huang is loyal to the dragon that he has sworn to 'Liadormi' which also means that he is loyal to the entire Bronze Dragonflight and their allies. He is also loyal to Pandaria, and the Lorewalker's who essentially helped him become the pandaren that he is today.

What does your character know about Heartwing?: He has heard of such information about Heartwing by Liadormi, but not the full information.
What is your character's history with dragons?: The Cloud Serpents are a native dragon species to Pandaria, and they are seen as a symbol of hope to the Pandaren people, and as such they are treated with honour and respect. The treatment for the Dragon's of either the Eastern Kingdom's or Kalimdor are no exception, and they will be given the same amount of respect as proof to his commitment to being a Dragonsworn to Liadormi.
What dragonflight does your character feel most aligned with?: Bronze Dragonflight
Affiliations: Pandaria, Lorewalkers, Temple of the White Tiger, Yulong Temple
{Optional} Professions:
Respect for authority: Authority is a form of manners that all Pandaren come to understand and respect, and respecting the authority of Dragon's is no exception. Loyal to the bone of the noble cause of the dragonflight's, Qiu Shi Huang obey's the command of the Bronze Dragonflight as well as the dragon he has sworn to.
Describe your character's personality:
A kind-hearted Pandaren at best, Qiu Shi Huang is one who is often positive as he is wise. Most of the time, he seems to act as a bit of a charmer, but deep down shows a brilliant and ever learning mind with intellect that matches up to expectations of Pandaren talent. Qiu Shi Huang also often acts much more of a "good sport" towards others, and rarely phased by anything that comes his way is often a note towards his aged-yet-wise mind.

Describe your own personality: Essentially the same as my character, but less on the smart and more along side being as thick as a ton of bricks. Hahaha!
Your character's hobbies: Drinking, Reading, Writing, Learning, Story Telling,
Character occupation: Lorewalker, (Dragonsworn), Painter, Poet, Novel Writer
Known/frequently used abilities/spells: Chi Wave, Detox, Expel Harm, Soothing Mist, Renewing Mist, Ring of peace, Tiger Palm, Diffuse magic, Vivify, Revival, life cocoon, enveloping mist, fists of fury, Chi burst, Blackout Kick, Effuse
Special/prestige spells/abilities of your character: Chronomany (Dragonsworn), Zen Flight (flying whilst on a meditating cloud), Reawaken (returns all dead party members to life.)
Summary of backstory:

Qiu Shi Huang was born the middle child of three to her parents, mother Ming Li Diao Bu and father Guang Shi Huang – the mother living her life under the banner of the Shado-Pan, and the father being a well respected Lorewalker. Both parents raised their three children well with honour, respect, and manners. His home resided within Zouchin Village, in the area of Kun-Lai Summit.

At age five, he was the youngest registered enrolment at the prestigious Temple of the White Tigar at the Kun-Lai Summit, assigned to the reverent Mistress Furypaw of Jade Forest at the request of his mother wanted to see her son become the latest fresh blood for the Shado-Pan. According to Mistress Furypaw, Qiu Shi Huang exemplified an exemplary understanding of the fundamentals of the martial arts early on, continually demonstrating an astounding aptitude for studying.


At only the age of eleven did he graduate from the Academy of the White Tiger from the junior division, seemingly impressed the masters of the Kun-Lai Summit by how quickly the young pandaren was learning from all his lessons so quickly, only to leave upon Graduation at the behest of his father who wanted his son to study at the Temple of the Jade Serpent, where he wanted his son to learn and understand the mental and spiritual side of history, chi, and the life of a Pandaren Monk. The young male felt as though his destiny was the equivilent of a yo-yo, evermore going up and down - always changing no matter how far one goes with studying.


By the Age of seventeen he later passed the Temple of Jade Serpent's Junior division and started the main adult curriculum course as well as learning the adult method's of combat at the Temple of the White Tiger, as year after year he travelled from the Jade Forest to the Kun-Lai Summit in not only satisfying his learning appetite, but also developing the young adult to become a fully fledged Pandaren that will use his skills and abilities to make a better world.


Many long years had past, eighteen years to be precise of the Pandaren committing to his travelling between the two Temples in order to properly study, learn and apply such techniques under his belt and since then he had become a very knowledgeable and well educated Pandaren, and after many long years did he finally have the chance to join the Shado-Pan, much to the expectation's and high praise that his mother wanted...


Only to be denied at the last moment, when the Sha outbreak occurred on Pandaria, and the Alliance and Horde commencing their war on the once peaceful land of Pandaria. His long years of having trained for the moment to become a member of such an elite organisation, only to fade into darkness the moment it even had the chance to spark. Qiu Shi Huang's mother was furious who set about in trying to eradicate the Sha so that her son could become a member, only to become consumed by the Sha of Anger which the other Shado-Pan had to put her down.


Torn by such a loss, Qiu Shi Huang found a home by his father's side at the Temple of the Jade Serpent where he gently went about to see his son become a proud and noble Lorewalker, where he aimed to teach his son all he knew to the end of his days, which sadly did upon Qiu Shi Huang's approval of becoming a fully fledged Lorewalker. With now found knowledge and a desire to learn, the pandaren spent the next two years travelling Azeroth, learning and understanding culture from the other races and listening to their tales and history.


One day upon journeying to the Eastern Kingdom, Qiu Shi Huang stumbled upon a tragic sight, a Bronze Dragon fighting for her life against a member of the infinite Dragonflight. Such a sight of a dragon losing an unfair battle caused the Pandaren to act, using all of his chi technique and martial art's prowess alongside the power of the Bronze Dragon they both managed to push back the Infinite Dragonflight, both of them watched as the very dragon flee the very area with it's tail between the legs in shame.

The bronze Dragon revealed her name as Liadormi, and thanked the Pandaren for his service, only to have met with kindness in return as the Monk went about and healed her wounds through the healing techniques of his chi, such an act managed to intrigue Liadormi, as both Dragon and pandaren decided to travel together as companions trading knowledge and telling stories and tales that involved their respected people, whilst merrily drinking Qiu Shi Huang's vast supplies of Brewery Ale!

These act's of companionship deepened the bond between Mortal and Dragon, Liadormi blessed the Pandaren with Knowledge in return that Qiu Shi Huang became 'Dragonsworn' to her service. He agreed without question, and was granted the knowledge and capability on how to use the power of Chronomancy. However, it will take a long time for the Pandaren to truly understand such a gift and it's usage.

Overtime, Liadormi informed Qiu Shi Huang of a family of Dragon's known as Heartwing and told the Pandaren to travel on her behalf to meet and befriend the other Bronze Dragon's as well as the other members of the different Dragonflight's that were still alive. She pointed out that they currently resided at Mithres Alymna, an island north of Highmountain and South-East to the Howling Fjord, and with a spirit held high in the joy of meeting other dragon's and learning the knowledge that they also held, Qiu Shi Huang travelled to Northrend, setting off to his next Grand Adventure!





Have you fully read this guild's Tomes of Ancient Times forum, and are fully aware of the content of the guild's rules and content?: Yes.
Have you understood Heartwing's current timeline?: Yes.
Your character's reason to join Heartwing: He was sent by Liadormi to Officially join Heartwing, to be fully welcomed to Dragonkind.
(OOC) What is your reason to join Heartwing: Warcraft Lore, Dragons, and a Panda being accepted by Dragons. What's not to love? (also I am a sucker for cute romances, so don't shame me if want to be romantically involved!)
Last edited by QiuShiHuang on Tue Jul 31, 2018 1:39 pm, edited 5 times in total.

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Re: [Pandaren] Qiu Shi Huang

Post#2 » Mon Jul 30, 2018 7:44 pm

Greetings Qiu Shi Huang!

I am Shendormu, an officer of Heartwing, and I will review your application.

While I'm reviewing your application, I'll be using a certain color code. Green will show exceptionally good things I like about the application, Yellow will show things that'll need further explanation, and Red shows things that have to be drastically changed. So let's get started.

What is your character's history with dragons?:


You've left it empty.

Respect for authority:


You've left this blank as well.

A kind-hearted Pandaren at best, Qiu Shi Huang is one who is often positive as he is wise. Most of the time, he seems to act as a bit of a charmer, but deep down shows a brilliant and ever learning mind with intellect that matches up to expectations of Pandaren talent. Qiu Shi Huang also often acts much more of a "good sport" towards others, and rarely phased by anything that comes his way is often a note towards his aged-yet-wise mind.


Well Written.

As a Monk of Pandaria, Qiu Shi Huang has the vast Knowledge of Chi, Martial Arts from the Temple of White Tiger, and both Healing and Curing remedies and techniques. Understanding the Art of brewery is another fine addition to his arsenal.


While this is valid. You haven't listed what common abilities/spells your character utilizes. For example: Minor chi healing.

As a Dragonsworn to a member of the Bronze Dragonflight, Qiu Shi Huang has the honour of having learnt Chronomancy. However, it will take many years for the Pandaren to properly master such a difficult spell to use.


Same as the comment above.

Gjalerbron within Howling Fjord, and with a spirit held high in the joy of meeting other dragon's and learning the knowledge that they also held, Qiu Shi Huang travelled to Northrend, setting off to his next Grand Adventure!


Heartwing no longer resides there. The order is currently stationed at Mithres Alymna, an island north of Highmountain and South-East to the Howling Fjord.

Aside from what I've pointed out, I don't see anything majorly wrong about this application, nor anything that requires attention. Therefore I'm going to deem this application as Accepted!
Contact Jes#0001 (Asherystrasz, guild leader), Goose#3297 (myself), Ritual#9682 (Imani) or Naefnair#8543 (Julius) for an invitation for the guild. Welcome to Heartwing!

However! Do make sure to do the necessary clarifications privately with the administration. After this has been done, edit those changes into your application.
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